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Post by LyrikalDreamer on Apr 1, 2004 21:02:50 GMT -5
[shadow=red,left,300]As promised everyone, here is an original from yours truly. Do keep in mind that anything produced on here by anyone is their own property and there for copyrighted to their name.[/shadow]
So many things can happen in a minute your heart can change or break and nothing can fix it. people's lives change with out a notice by the drop of ink or someone taken from us. A sad song sung with a heavy heart missing out on love, just to scared to take part.
I see you'll cry for me but will you die for me? In a minute you would lie so that i couldnt see the mistrust that you have lead me to believe. Pain is love and love is pain, Giving so much that its never the same when its all over. Who are we then? Lost souls gripping to the last shreds of happiness remembering that picture of what we love, that face.
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Post by DreamyAzteka on Apr 6, 2004 22:45:12 GMT -5
That was tight....i have much respect for you....ive tried my best to write some are ok...maybe when i have a chance ill post something up here k? check ya later.
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Post by LyrikalDreamer on Apr 7, 2004 19:34:37 GMT -5
girl all you gotta do is let it flow outta your heart. And then before you know it, its sitting there and you're thinkin' "whoah! That is good!" Keep tru girl talk to you soon!
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Post by sheena_69 on May 29, 2004 16:28:28 GMT -5
that was pretty tight you know how to throw it down. see thats how i live my life. every day i write me a little poem and make it to be a song.one of these days i want to be famous and out their cause thats what my dad wouldve want for me.i would like to have you peep the one about my dad one of these days..but what i want to happen like be all famous aint gonna happen cause i aint got that type of talent,but ill try.they all tell me i will by being all poetic and loving to make songs of my own.im just hoping ill get the chance.
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Post by LyrikalDreamer on May 29, 2004 22:18:39 GMT -5
Sheena, girl, alot of music stars pay people to write the songs for them. You could make it famous like that. Ever consider it?? And girl hit me up in the email smurphycat21@yahoo.com and send me your flow on your dad. I gots more but the time is of the essence and work hardly allows me any of it. Take care girl LyrikalDreamer *melissa*
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Post by sheena_69 on May 30, 2004 17:34:19 GMT -5
i would love to hear more of yours,get me back @ sheena_gonzalez2004@yahoo.com thanks i always think about making it famous like that my family belives in me and tells me that theres alot of things i can do with it,(hopefully) alright i sent you my flow get me back with what you think.THANK YOU
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Post by sheena_69 on May 30, 2004 17:38:30 GMT -5
keep up with your job and dont lose your touch,girl cause your flow is tight.
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Post by WolfHeart on Jul 9, 2004 4:55:48 GMT -5
AHHHHHHHH!!! GET OUT OF MY BRAIN!! LOL MAJOR PROPS GIRL....TIGHT FLOW.....
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Post by nbknativluva on Oct 10, 2004 0:32:10 GMT -5
whoa girl dat shit was tight! like you say to sheena let it come from ur heart!
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