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Post by Amuze on Jul 12, 2004 16:19:04 GMT -5
Im sorry for the way I acted,
And trying not to care.
But now that you are gone,
Im wishing that you where there.
There at your house,
Calling you anytime.
Just loving the feeling,
That you where almost mine.
You actually had feelings for me,
And wasn't scared to show me how you feel.
Some reason I screwed things up,
Thinking that my feelings where unreal
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Post by LyrikalDreamer on Jul 12, 2004 19:45:52 GMT -5
Damn Amuze, that shit is tight. Here is another of mine...
[glow=red,2,300]Saying Goodbye To A Painful Place[/glow]
How do you say goodbye to something you love but have come to hate?
How can you walk away from a loving yet painful place?
Can I make it out of here if I don't look back?
Damn its hard saying goodbye to a painful place.
Reaching for the moon, hoping to grab a star,
God why do my dreams seem so far?!
I look around hoping for some support, searching for a friendly face.
But none come to my aid.
Why is it so hard to say goodbye to a painful place?
Striving to please everyone, even those who mean nothing to me.
Its killing me inside! Why can't you all see?
But it doesn't matter does it?
As long as to you it seems fit.
Its crazy leaving with out a trace,
But how else do you say goodbye to a painful place?
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Post by Amuze on Jul 14, 2004 4:01:47 GMT -5
hey that sound tight too. hey here's one i just wrote give me feedback:
my every tear
reflects your face
in every dream
only your trace
my hopeless longing
to hold again
too long from now
i can't wait till then
if my heart lies
where my treasure fares
then far away, but with you
my heart shares
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Post by LyrikalDreamer on Jul 15, 2004 13:51:01 GMT -5
Girl your shit is deep. We should get together with Sheena the three of us and write a deep song. Holla back girl!
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Post by Ariel on Jul 20, 2004 11:49:56 GMT -5
hey you both are tight. you guys are talented and amuze i know that isn't all you have so come give them something they can really enjoy. anyway just wanted to let you all know that you guys are talented and enjoyed reading your flows. ;D
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Post by DreamyAzteka on Jul 21, 2004 0:55:04 GMT -5
Damn i agree with ariel...you gurls are tight. i like to write also but i could never compare to yall. i give you major props...id like to see more
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Post by Amuze on Jul 22, 2004 4:02:12 GMT -5
Yo.. Ariel thanks i know i have some other things and maybe i will put them up wait and see..and thanks dreamy and anyone else that liked it....
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Post by Amuze on Jul 23, 2004 2:39:48 GMT -5
okay this is another one of mine:
Untouched i was,
But you took that away,
As i lye cryin in my bed,
You have nothing say
Alone i felt,
Like there was no one to tell,
So a secreat it became,
Into a dark hole life fell
Hurt and Shamed,
As no one felt my pain,
Lyer i was called,
Only the Lord kept me sane
A virgin no more,
For you closed that door,
tore apart my life,
In my back was a knife
A Dad i called you,
It seemed like you cared,
But betrayed i was,
You were never really there
I had no mother,
As her lover came first,
Kicked to the streets,
With rage my heart burst
Untouched I was,
But you stole that away,
Life for me ended,
As you still have nothing to say
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