My newest poem!

[Amuze]

hey everyone this is one of my newest poems tell what you think ;D either on here or email me [e-mail] i really want your input:

when i first met you
you were the sweetest thing
you made me feel so special
and my heart sing
i thought you were the one that'd change my world
now i see the truth and it makes me wanna hurl
you lied and decieved me
making me seem like a fool
makes me wonder how you could treat me so cruel
how could you be like that?
how could you even think that
you say you don't want me to leave
but it's either her or me
you gotta make your decision now
what did she do to win you over?
i gave you my heart and everything
but now it's over
you said that only time would tear us apart
but instead you went and broke my heart
you used your charm on her like you did on me
how could i be so blind and not see
that you were acting differently
how could you be like that?
how could you even think that?
you say you don't want me to leave
but it's either her or me
now what do you have to say?
cuz i'm packing my stuff and leaving today
i can't take you back
because of what happened in the past
i hope you're happy!

[619 LADY DREAMS PLAYGIRL]

~~MY FEELINGS~~~

I LOVE YOU THE WAY YOU MAKE ME FEEL WITH JUST A SMILE 4M U
ALL MY PROBLEMS DISAPPEAR,I WISH I COULD BE WIT U 24/7 CUZ BEING WIT YOU FEELS LIKE HEAVEN.THE DAY I MET YOU I THOUGHT U BE SOMEONE I LOVED AS A BROTHER ,I NEVER THOUGHT I'D FALL 4 U ,BUT MY FEELINGS 4 U GOT STRONGER ,I COULD HELP THE FEELINGS I GOT EVERYTIME U CALL ,WITH JUST A SOUND OF YOR VOICE MY HEART WOULD SKIPBEATS AND WAS FULL OF JOY U GAVE ME FEELINGS I'VE NEVER FELT AND WITHOUT YOU BY MY SIDE WOULD BE MY SIDE WOULD BE A LIVING HELL SO, I WANNA THANK YOU FO MAKING ME FEEL THE WAY I DO~~~~~

[619 LADY DREAMS PLAYGIRL]

I SIT HERE AND WONDER ,WONDER IF WHAT I FEEL IS REAL ,I LUV YOU SO MUCH YOU DON'T EVEN UNDERSTAND HOW CAN U NOT SEE HOW DEEP MY FEELINGS ARE FOR U? DO YOU FEEL THE SAME ? DO YOU EVEN LUV ME ? WHY ARE YOU STILL W/ME? BABY I NEED ANSWERS TO ALL MY QUESTIONS .I CRY ,CRY FOR U ,CRY FOR US.WHAT WILL HAPPEN?HOW MUCHWILL THIS END ? I JUST HOPE WHATEVER HAPPENS ITS BY UR SIDE CUZ EVEN THOUGH I HAVE ALL THIS PAIN BELIVE IT OR NOT I'M SO DEEPLY IN LUV W/U ~~~```

[Amuze]

sitting here alone thinking about you
knwing that it's wrong but i'm in love with you
now i'm thinking of whether we'd ever be
together jjust you and me
people like our family want us apart
and whenever that happens it leaves me in the dark
so now another sad love song is playing and it's helping me get through
cause the only thing on my mind is me and you
whenever i'm near you i;m in a different world
and i get a sweet sensation that send me in a whilr
you're like an addiction that i need
since i can't be near you, i crave you badly
i miss you somuch that even the
thought of being near you seems like a mere fantasy

[LyrikalDreamer]

SOMEONES IN LOVE AMUZE!!!!!!!!!!!! Hahaha! No te creas. Girl you smokin on your shit there! Tight tight tight poems ma. Keepin real I see.

[Amuze]

hey but yeah man i was in love but that is no longer *cries* yeah i wish it was but yeah there is the rest of my life to find another love...yeah haha thanks for the props i do the best i can at these things

[kayla509]

;D thats a bad a** peom keep it upTEXT

[LyrikalDreamer]

Hey Amuze and everyone else. As soon as I am done checkin and updating the boards here, I'm toss down some of my flows I've been writing. Pretty much averaging one a day. Tripped out huh. Some are going on to albums in interludes others are there for the buying. Hows everyone doin?

[Erica]

hey girl that was a realy nice poem and i hope to read some more keep it up.

[la Dreamer]

Truthfully and honestly i love you to death.
For everytime i see you i have to hold my breath.
For the fear you'll look at me and know who i really am.
I'm the person who's love's you,
Whho's always held your hand.
Who's stood right by your side to keep your feet on land.
I know that sounds like a true friend,
but there's a person who must never know,
for evey time she see's you suddenly she glows. She does't love you more than i do.

[la travieza]

damn gurl dat wuz sun bad a** s***!!! keep it up
i hop i can read sum mor one day so keep writting cuz u r really good @it!!!!!!!!! ;D

[Sunshine 41206]

:)Hey yeah I know how you feel cause thats what happened to me with one of my friendz want
to take my boyfriend away from and datz the way it goes.