Poems By Me

[Ajaunaie]

Hey i have a couple poems and i wanna know what you think so let me know.

"I'm Sorry"
I'm sorry that you had to choose,
I'm sorry that you thought my love was untrue,
I'm sorry fot the time you thought you wasted,
and i'm sorry for the sorrow that you've tasted.
I'm sorry for any drama i've caused in youre life
and i'm sorry that in the long run i couldn't be your wife.
As i look back i see us two,
fighting over her, and not knowing what to do.
I'm sorry for the fights when i slammed the door,
and i'm sorry i gave up but i couldn't cry nemore.
I'm sorry for all the wrong you've done to me,
And i'm sorry for the person you'll never be.
So I'm sorry for you and what your life cost,
and i'm sorry for the love that we lost.

"Deception"
I gave you my heart,
and you just tore it apart.
all our time together meant nothing
cuz you were playin me frm the start.
I loved you with all of my heart u know i loved you so,
but you threw it away when you decided to go.
You'd say that i'm the only 1
you only wanted me,
But i don't know i'f it's true
if it's really meant to be
I thought the love we had was full of perfection,
but you proved me wrong because now i know
it was full of nothing but deception!

"When"
When i sit in my room i stare outside
i look at the moon and i'm grateful you're mine
when i know you're there i feel so safe
when i hear your voice i know everything's ok
when i'm feeling down i turn to you
when i need support you're the one i choose
As time goes on my love just grows
you're my one true love and i don't care who knows.

"dedicated to you"
My heart was in shambles 'til u came along
u made everything right
when everything was going wrong
I had just lost a love and had started to cry
but you were there to dry my tears and help me get by
On that i saw you sitting there
i wanted to talk to u but i just didn't dare
your smile makes me happy
and your laugh makes me smile
we have our problems we're goin through
but no matter what i say my love to you is true
Even if i don't say it i'll always care
us being apart is so hard to bare
it just feels like we're falling apart
i have so much to say i just don't know where to start
i'm so confused with what's going on
and i haven't been with u in so long
I want to stay with you through ALL of our problems
all my love is to you and only you i promise!TEXT

[SycGhost]

You got the love, the passion and the spirit to tell the world you got talent. Never let that talent go to waste. i almost did. Then the lyricist and poet in me couldn't stand to work hard for mediocrity wasn't let me be me. SycGhost. Sycco Wild. So rap caught me and I stepped back into the light.

Peace
SycGhost
SNP

[LyrikalDreamer]

You got some mad talent there and fully listen to Syc. Dont let it fade to nothing. Keep expressing yourself like that. You do have beautiful talent.

[Ajaunaie]

Yo thanx guyz yah i'm bouts to hit the recording studio in a minute with some guyz from around here. They're hard . But i just keep on writin those songs and peoms to get them out there

[A4L]

DAMM GIRLLL KOOL POEMSS WRITE SOME MORE

[Ajaunaie]

Hey guyz I have a new poem here so let me know what you think k.
"Dreams"
The sun is so bright,
THe sky is so blue.
I lift my head up,
all i see is you.
You're like an angel,
that was sent from above.
Your voice is so soothing,
like the coo of a dove.
You come up to me,
and say how you feel.
But in my mind i think,
it's too good to be real.
I reach for your hand,
but you pull away.
I feel like you have,
so much more to say.
Everything isn't exactly as it seems,
I wake up, You're not there...
It was only a dream.

[Amuze]

damn those were some bad a$$ dropz right there ... you got some mad talent for realz ...keep it up on the real

[BRITTANY]

Ajaunaie said:

Hey guyz I have a new poem here so let me know what you think k.
"Dreams"
The sun is so bright,
THe sky is so blue.
I lift my head up,
all i see is you.
You're like an angel,
that was sent from above.
Your voice is so soothing,
like the coo of a dove.
You come up to me,
and say how you feel.
But in my mind i think,
it's too good to be real.
I reach for your hand,
but you pull away.
I feel like you have,
so much more to say.
Everything isn't exactly as it seems,
I wake up, You're not there...
It was only a dream.

[jessi]

Guest-BRITTANY said:

:) :)

n i think itz ok but needs some diferent thing 2 it :)

[Ajaunaie]

[glow=blue,2,300]hey yall check this poem and let me know what you think k

"Frustrations"
Abandoned and alone is how she left me
growing without her guidance, because she just didn't care about me
feeling emptiness deep down in my soul
my childhood, my dignity, my self-esteem, she stole
i saw it all slipping away, right out of my grasp
but she can't keep me down forever,
too bad for her it won't last
her words no longer hurt
i've grown numb to the pain
she lost all her power the day my rescuer came
my rescuer was the one i found in myself
now i know i've been better off,
since the day she left.[/glow]

[Amuze]

damn ...those were some sad linez..pero from the heart and soo emotional i felt it girl!!.. ;D...keep writtin cuz you got some talen[/color]

[HAPPY]

hey i like ur poems especially the first one i have some poems of my own heres one:

Confuse

I am confuse
I dont know how i feel about you anymore
I thought i oved you, but i dont
I think i like someone else
I just hope i dont
I dont to want to love him
I dont even want to like him
But what can i do?
I am so confuse
I dont know what to do
I cant stop thinking about you
I cant even concentrate at school because you are always on my mind
I need help i cant do this to her
She is the only person that has always been there for me
I cant do this to her
I am so confuse about you
I dont want to love you
But i have never felt this wayin my life
I think i do love you even though i dont want to
I dont know how i feel about you anymore i thought i loved you but i guess i am over you
I hope not but i think i am
I am a confuse girl that doesnt know what to do anymore with her feelings

BY CRYSTAL FATTORINI

[LyrikalDreamer]

Nice Happy! Pero, too many "I"s in it. but its still good!

heres some more from me, stuff I wrote on a whim.

(Untitled)
take away this pain and these tears
wipe away the bad times and erase my fears.
Hold my hand in yours look into my eyes
Hug me close as I let out a breathless sigh
I cant keep my weary soul going
my eyes wont stay open.
My muscles are going limp
a moment of clarity shows you're not really here
You are hundreds of miles away on this great blue sphere.
But i still feel your hand as it caresses my face
I hear your voice whisper ever so softly
"its gonna be ok, i love you"

Breathe
Take a step back close your eyes and breathe
Your heart is racing, and you're about to seethe
Your mind is a clouded mess
Hands are shaking from all this damn stress.
A constant buzz in your ears
and late at night crying silent tears
you stare at the ceiling and clench your teeth
and try to tell yourself, just breathe.
But it isnt so easy to tune out the world
When one after another someones problems become yours
and you listen as each one becomes unfurled.
You stop breathing and its your mind you began to explore.

Leave this world behind, close your eyes
Go ahead release those tears and cry
No one can stop you, let it all out
You got to release, and just breathe.

You wanna step into mind
And look around and see what you find
You wanna take away my sorrows,
Make me understand I'm something more than what someone borrows
You look into my eyes and say just breathe its gonna be alright
Throw those troubles out the door, forget all your plights.
Can you see the fear dancing in my eyes
Do you hear the sadness with every sigh?
Its so hard just to breathe and let it all go
I've worked hard for everything that i have to show

I'm letting it all go now I'm gonna start to breathe
My mind is jam packed theres alot to get out.
So watch out world this is gonna be brutal
To ignore this pain and these tears will be futile
My heart is still racing my head is still spinning
Im staring at the ceiling with tears spilling
My teeth are clenched, my soul unwilling
but I gotta do it, the time is now, I gotta breathe.
I breathe.

[Amuze]

good job happty!!..but imma agree with lyrikal there are too many I's it's gettin kind of annoying


and good job on those ones too lyrikal!!...you got talent and going places[/color]

[Ajaunaie]

[glow=red,2,300] Hey guyz those were bed thanx for ur input on mines too but i liked urs happy although they r right there too many i's but urs were bad too lyrikal[/glow]