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Post by minilollie on Jan 17, 2005 12:47:23 GMT -5
wass up yall how many f yal have talent
well i ain't callin any body out
i was just curius cause this has been going on other forums that's why
i'll go first
hommie or freind ya gurl mini hottest young spitter/ i battled the hot mcs and turned them into quitters
it's me ya gurl mini aka ms grimes/ only 13 and already got a license to rhyme
i am flowin straight from the u.s.a/ and not a fake from the uk i'm a little freestyler and i could play all day
so yall out thurr check it out and give me props/ because of the way i make ur hair stand up and urr ear drums pop
now i won't mess up like pac got shot or how biggie got knocked
n dun think i am jokin/ cause u could soon find urr self chokin
what yall think comin from a 13 yr old pretty soon turning 14
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Post by LyrikalDreamer on Jan 18, 2005 23:56:27 GMT -5
hey mini we do have a freestyle battle on in here. Its under Fan Site Battle of the Rhymes. And hey in all good sport dont start hating cuz if you know the game then you know tha rules. Right?
Check yo license ta rhyme girl look on tha back/ its says "haha just kidding! yo shit is wack!"/ only 13 you still a youngun child/ Dont think you hot, cuz hun, you aint even mild/ you little alright, and if you play all day/ then you got a lot to learn this is all i can say/ now listen to your teachers SycGhost and me/ read thru the site take your notes learn and see/ we know where we coming from we rap the tru way/ its all about tru life and trials and tribulations/ not just about words that rhyme in unison/ keep your mind open mini but let your heart speak/ we got nothin but love for ya.
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Post by minilollie on Jan 22, 2005 22:14:53 GMT -5
oh man that was tight hey your rhyme is true now u got me thinkin good lookin out
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Post by LyrikalDreamer on Jan 28, 2005 18:46:09 GMT -5
Any time mini! Hey I just learned along time ago, freestylin comes from the heart, you dont put much thought into it. Try it again.
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Post by alex on Jan 30, 2005 22:51:03 GMT -5
Hey i understant ur a rookie but ur good like a cookie so dont let those haters out thurr mes with ur flow cuz u'll blow thurr flow out into da low, Best wishes mija u got hopes! love ya
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Post by Juan Orellana on Mar 7, 2005 15:46:52 GMT -5
everything was right until I met you/I always thought having a dad would be so cool/how could you leave my mother and I in our time of need/my mother even had to hook just so I could eat/but I dont blame u i guess u didnt love me/I would cry to the thught that my own dad didnt wanna hug me/while my mom was in labor you were tricking around/nigga I bet you probably slept with every woman in town/now look at me im bout to be my own dad/only difference is that imma be the father that i never had/now im glad/every time i see mom I always get sad/every time I see a happy family i get mad/ha i bet you didnt know this, you bout to be a grandpa cuz im bout to have my own kid/but imma always be there for him/ never leave my own son, cuz in my mind to me that's a deadly sin/so i hope u have good life and forget about me/and forget about that granchild you will never get to see/I really wish you will and hope your life is happy without me/I guess you never had the balls to really say you love me/so later pops dont worry I wont fail/ Ill probably never see you again so good luck in hell/
PS tell me what yall think true story
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Post by LyrikalDreamer on Mar 8, 2005 22:44:56 GMT -5
Hey Juan, that was tight, heart felt and tear jerking but it was tight. Coming from the heart. amazing. under this post is one of my latest. holla back with your own on my own and keep it real and close. true.
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Post by LyrikalDreamer on Mar 9, 2005 2:47:50 GMT -5
I cross my t's and dot my i's and still in the back of my mind I dont know why I never set out to make an enemy but some how some way these people become envious of me I strive and work hard to get where i stand leaving behind footprints in the paths i've taken in the wet sand, life keeps rushing trying to keep up with me but i'm always one step ahead. they say idle hands are the devils friends but busy hands create more evil and hate then still hands. A constant buzz in my head looking over my shoulder Paranoid some other is after my prize. I'm in my prime and i keep my eye on that prize at all time struggling hustling crying and laughing A dollar in my hand will make me millions in time Someone trying to pull me down speaking false words and spitting hate in my face Broken promises and broken words, demolished friendships, vindinctive lies being slurred blurred vision, stirred emotions, obsurd, and preferred motives I stand with my back against the wall With no one I can call But step back cuz you dont know me cat ill fight for my life and you really dont want me to react I'm the judge of this court and here is my order You've been found hateful and decietful Envious, delirious, conspiring against a soul Displaying held back emotions for the world to see Extreme caution being taken with me Control your mind and let your heart soar free And let your life take flight cuz in the end, its gonna be alright. --------------------------- and ---------------------------
Take a step back close your eyes and breathe Your heart is racing, and you're about to seethe Your mind is a clouded mess Hands are shaking from all this damn stress. A constant buzz in your ears and late at night crying silent tears you stare at the ceiling and clench your teeth and try to tell yourself, just breathe. But it isnt so easy to tune out the world When one after another someones problems become yours and you listen as each one becomes unfurled. You stop breathing and its your mind you began to explore.
Leave this world behind, close your eyes Go ahead release those tears and cry No one can stop you, let it all out You got to release, and just breathe.
You wanna step into my mind And look around and see what you find? You wanna take away my sorrows, Make me understand I'm something more than what someone borrows You look into my eyes and say just breathe its gonna be alright Throw those troubles out the door, forget all your plights. Can you see the fear dancing in my eyes Do you hear the sadness with every sigh? Its so hard just to breathe and let it all go I've worked hard for everything that i have to show
I'm letting it all go now I'm gonna start to breathe My mind is jam packed theres alot to get out. So watch out world this is gonna be brutal To ignore this pain and these tears will be futile My heart is still racing my head is still spinning Im staring at the ceiling with tears spilling My teeth are clenched, my soul unwilling but I gotta do it, the time is now, I gotta breathe. I breathe.
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Post by minilollie on Mar 29, 2005 22:22:29 GMT -5
yall 2 good i can't think of what to say but one luv bac at cha hey nice rhymes boi that sounded tight buf messed with what u went thru well thanx foe the positive stuff and yeah i think i gt betta well one luv t all ya mini
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Post by Amuze on Mar 30, 2005 3:43:28 GMT -5
DAMN LYRICAL!!
THOSE WERE SOME TIGHT A$$ LINEz..
LOVE GIRL
AMUZE APPROVES
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Post by Mz DeVious on Mar 31, 2005 16:56:43 GMT -5
yo, so what up you think that you can spit flow,but you need to keep your head in them books, and leave that rap shit to the pro's, cause i'm the lady, the temptras, that all around all purpose female, with cruel intentions, and if your not careful i'll slap you senseless, leave you brain cut up in different demensions, cause my lyrics are ill, they got more force then scarface ready to kill, i come strappin, but don't worry bout bullets,cause lyrically i come packing, i make up for what them other females is lackin. so hit me up if you want to get this thing crackin this is Mz.D OUT!
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Post by LyrikalDreamer on Apr 3, 2005 1:54:23 GMT -5
Amuze, my girl, thanks for the love. Let your heart open up and the real stuff comes out right? Hahahaha.
Now onto business.....
Whys it everybody with half a brain thinks they can rock the mic, it fuckin drives me insane. Mz.D i got a gift for ya and I hope you use it well, its called a dictionary fuckin learn how to spell. You insult Scarface when you use his name, tryin to spice up those wack ass words with it, that is just too lame. You say you're strappin and packin but to me it looks like you slackin. you cant face a lethal lyricist like yours truely, and expect to make it outta the woods smoothly.
hahaha that was wack! Its ok tho, im just bored. AMUZE DROP YOUR RHYMES!!!!!!
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Post by Amuze on Apr 4, 2005 9:37:44 GMT -5
Amuze, my girl, thanks for the love. Let your heart open up and the real stuff comes out right? Hahahaha. hahaha that was wack! Its ok tho, im just bored. AMUZE DROP YOUR RHYMES!!!!!! haha no problem girl...we dont't talk anymore what's up with that?..lol i know you got a busy life i', nly playin...anyway amuze don't "battle"..lol nor do i know how to flow pero i can write poetry i'll post one just for you lol..[/color]
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Post by LyrikalDreamer on Apr 7, 2005 4:55:22 GMT -5
girl you gots my yahoo just hit me up. im always invisible on the messenger. Know what! I miss SychGhost! i love flowin with him! i should shout out to him...I'll email his ass. Hahahaha.
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Post by minilollie on Apr 18, 2005 21:47:47 GMT -5
yall tell me if it is better
allright lets see what i got
i am doin this cause i wanna know if i still got it/ by the looks of it i think neva even had it/
since i started i have had people dissing/ i ain't worrying cause they @$$ is now missing/ ha
they tryin to mess wit me/ bull$#!t cause they r nothing but wanna be's/ afraid to sleep and take those z's/ why? please you thinkima go and put a bulet down your thoart but i won't/ so dun trip/
i just carry what is mine/ a nine/ ready to blow minds/ people run when they see me in the streets/ cause they all know i am loaded with more than heat/ ha
well i ain't done/ there is more to come/ cause this ain't the ending/ my stuff is barely begging/
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