freestyle

[minilollie]

wass up yall how many f yal have talent

well i ain't callin any body out

i was just curius cause this has been going on other forums that's why


i'll go first

hommie or freind ya gurl mini hottest young spitter/
i battled the hot mcs and turned them into quitters

it's me ya gurl mini aka ms grimes/
only 13 and already got a license to rhyme

i am flowin straight from the u.s.a/ and not a fake from the uk
i'm a little freestyler and i could play all day

so yall out thurr check it out and give me props/
because of the way i make ur hair stand up and urr ear drums pop

now i won't mess up like pac got shot or how biggie got knocked

n dun think i am jokin/ cause u could soon find urr self chokin



what yall think comin from a 13 yr old pretty soon turning 14

[LyrikalDreamer]

hey mini we do have a freestyle battle on in here. Its under Fan Site Battle of the Rhymes. And hey in all good sport dont start hating cuz if you know the game then you know tha rules. Right?

Check yo license ta rhyme girl look on tha back/
its says "haha just kidding! yo shit is wack!"/
only 13 you still a youngun child/
Dont think you hot, cuz hun, you aint even mild/
you little alright, and if you play all day/
then you got a lot to learn this is all i can say/
now listen to your teachers SycGhost and me/
read thru the site take your notes learn and see/
we know where we coming from we rap the tru way/
its all about tru life and trials and tribulations/
not just about words that rhyme in unison/
keep your mind open mini but let your heart speak/
we got nothin but love for ya.

[minilollie]

oh man that was


tight hey your rhyme is true

now u got me thinkin

good lookin out

[LyrikalDreamer]

Any time mini! Hey I just learned along time ago, freestylin comes from the heart, you dont put much thought into it. Try it again.

[alex]

Hey i understant ur a rookie but ur good like a cookie so dont let those haters out thurr mes with ur flow cuz u'll blow thurr flow out into da low, Best wishes mija u got hopes! love ya

[Juan Orellana]

everything was right until I met you/I always thought having a dad would be so cool/how could you leave my mother and I in our time of need/my mother even had to hook just so I could eat/but I dont blame u i guess u didnt love me/I would cry to the thught that my own dad didnt wanna hug me/while my mom was in labor you were tricking around/nigga I bet you probably slept with every woman in town/now look at me im bout to be my own dad/only difference is that imma be the father that i never had/now im glad/every time i see mom I always get sad/every time I see a happy family i get mad/ha i bet you didnt know this, you bout to be a grandpa cuz im bout to have my own kid/but imma always be there for him/ never leave my own son, cuz in my mind to me that's a deadly sin/so i hope u have good life and forget about me/and forget about that granchild you will never get to see/I really wish you will and hope your life is happy without me/I guess you never had the balls to really say you love me/so later pops dont worry I wont fail/ Ill probably never see you again so good luck in hell/

PS tell me what yall think true story

[LyrikalDreamer]

Hey Juan, that was tight, heart felt and tear jerking but it was tight. Coming from the heart. amazing. under this post is one of my latest. holla back with your own on my own and keep it real and close. true.

[LyrikalDreamer]

I cross my t's and dot my i's
and still in the back of my mind I dont know why
I never set out to make an enemy
but some how some way these people become envious of me
I strive and work hard to get where i stand
leaving behind footprints in the paths i've taken in the wet sand,
life keeps rushing trying to keep up with me
but i'm always one step ahead.
they say idle hands are the devils friends
but busy hands create more evil and hate then still hands.
A constant buzz in my head looking over my shoulder
Paranoid some other is after my prize.
I'm in my prime and i keep my eye on that prize at all time
struggling hustling crying and laughing
A dollar in my hand will make me millions in time
Someone trying to pull me down
speaking false words and spitting hate in my face
Broken promises and broken words,
demolished friendships, vindinctive lies being slurred
blurred vision, stirred emotions, obsurd, and preferred motives
I stand with my back against the wall
With no one I can call
But step back cuz you dont know me cat
ill fight for my life and you really dont want me to react
I'm the judge of this court and here is my order
You've been found hateful and decietful
Envious, delirious, conspiring against a soul
Displaying held back emotions for the world to see
Extreme caution being taken with me
Control your mind and let your heart soar free
And let your life take flight
cuz in the end, its gonna be alright.
---------------------------
and
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Take a step back close your eyes and breathe
Your heart is racing, and you're about to seethe
Your mind is a clouded mess
Hands are shaking from all this damn stress.
A constant buzz in your ears
and late at night crying silent tears
you stare at the ceiling and clench your teeth
and try to tell yourself, just breathe.
But it isnt so easy to tune out the world
When one after another someones problems become yours
and you listen as each one becomes unfurled.
You stop breathing and its your mind you began to explore.

Leave this world behind, close your eyes
Go ahead release those tears and cry
No one can stop you, let it all out
You got to release, and just breathe.

You wanna step into my mind
And look around and see what you find?
You wanna take away my sorrows,
Make me understand I'm something more than what someone borrows
You look into my eyes and say just breathe its gonna be alright
Throw those troubles out the door, forget all your plights.
Can you see the fear dancing in my eyes
Do you hear the sadness with every sigh?
Its so hard just to breathe and let it all go
I've worked hard for everything that i have to show

I'm letting it all go now I'm gonna start to breathe
My mind is jam packed theres alot to get out.
So watch out world this is gonna be brutal
To ignore this pain and these tears will be futile
My heart is still racing my head is still spinning
Im staring at the ceiling with tears spilling
My teeth are clenched, my soul unwilling
but I gotta do it, the time is now, I gotta breathe.
I breathe.

[minilollie]

yall 2 good

i can't think of what to say but one luv bac at cha

hey nice rhymes boi that sounded tight buf messed with what u went thru


well thanx foe the positive stuff and yeah i think i gt betta

well one luv t all ya
mini

[Amuze]

DAMN LYRICAL!!

THOSE WERE SOME TIGHT A$$ LINEz..

LOVE GIRL

AMUZE APPROVES

[Mz DeVious]

yo, so what up you think that you can spit flow,but you need to keep your head in them books, and leave that rap shit to the pro's, cause i'm the lady, the temptras, that all around all purpose female, with cruel intentions, and if your not careful i'll slap you senseless, leave you brain cut up in different demensions, cause my lyrics are ill, they got more force then scarface ready to kill, i come strappin, but don't worry bout bullets,cause lyrically i come packing, i make up for what them other females is lackin. so hit me up if you want to get this thing crackin this is Mz.D OUT!

[LyrikalDreamer]

Amuze, my girl, thanks for the love. Let your heart open up and the real stuff comes out right? Hahahaha.

Now onto business.....

Whys it everybody with half a brain thinks they can rock the mic, it fuckin drives me insane. Mz.D i got a gift for ya and I hope you use it well, its called a dictionary fuckin learn how to spell. You insult Scarface when you use his name, tryin to spice up those wack ass words with it, that is just too lame. You say you're strappin and packin but to me it looks like you slackin. you cant face a lethal lyricist like yours truely, and expect to make it outta the woods smoothly.

hahaha that was wack! Its ok tho, im just bored. AMUZE DROP YOUR RHYMES!!!!!!

[Amuze]

LyrikalDreamer said:

Amuze, my girl, thanks for the love. Let your heart open up and the real stuff comes out right? Hahahaha.


hahaha that was wack! Its ok tho, im just bored. AMUZE DROP YOUR RHYMES!!!!!!

haha no problem girl...we dont't talk anymore what's up with that?..lol i know you got a busy life i', nly playin...anyway amuze don't "battle"..lol nor do i know how to flow pero i can write poetry i'll post one just for you lol..[/color]

[LyrikalDreamer]

girl you gots my yahoo just hit me up. im always invisible on the messenger. Know what! I miss SychGhost! i love flowin with him! i should shout out to him...I'll email his ass. Hahahaha.

[minilollie]

yall tell me if it is better




allright lets see what i got

i am doin this cause i wanna know if i still got it/
by the looks of it i think neva even had it/

since i started i have had people dissing/
i ain't worrying cause they @$$ is now missing/ ha

they tryin to mess wit me/
bull$#!t cause they r nothing but wanna be's/
afraid to sleep and take those z's/
why?
please you thinkima go
and put a bulet down your thoart
but i won't/
so dun trip/

i just carry what is mine/
a nine/
ready to blow minds/
people run when they see me in the streets/
cause they all know i am loaded with more than heat/ ha

well i ain't done/
there is more to come/
cause this ain't the ending/
my stuff is barely begging/