..A Poem lol

[Amuze]

not some of my newer work pero still a poem lol..if any one wants to read more of my work get at me...[/color]

glare at you with great dispise
but i look away from your eyes
i want to smack you for all you have done
how did i lose, how could you have won

how could you lie about such a thing
boy did i ever mean anything?
why am i hurting and hating you so
i did love you once, didnt you know?

but there you go spreading your lies
hurting me badly, making me cry
i have this biggest urge to just hit you
but its something i could never do

i stand at the side watching you move
your face in my mind, i cannot remove
i have memories that i should forget
of your fakeness and of a relationship i do regret

and there you go making a fool of yourself
but it seems that the loser is no one but myself
how is it i hurt when i see your face
but you go and act like ive been erased

i hate you so much and i gave you my heart!
but you just wanted something, so you tore me apart
i was nothing, to you it was just a silly game
i was the prize, your easily won claim

i stand her with nothing to say
and after all that you've said you still get away
im falling apart, my heart piece by piece
will my pain ever release

im crying inside but ill never let you see
the person you broke was this person, me
how cold you break one once so strong
how did i let this all go so wrong?

[shorty4]

Dawwwm Girl you should become a poet !!!!!!!!!!

NAh girl for reals , Keep doing ya thing cause you really break it down.

[Ajaunaie]

[glow=red,2,300]DAMN girl that was bad keep it real 4 sho thats the only way to go it sounds good and comes from the heart keep it real and do ur thing[/glow]

[Amuze]

Shorty said:

Dawwwm Girl you should become a poet !!!!!!!!!!

NAh girl for reals , Keep doing ya thing cause you really break it down.

thanks girl!!...lol...and about the poet thing..i am a poet at heart and that's all i need ;D[/color]

[Amuze]

Ajaunaie said:

[glow=red,2,300]DAMN girl that was bad keep it real 4 sho thats the only way to go it sounds good and comes from the heart keep it real and do ur thing[/glow]

[shadow=red,left,300]thanks girl!!...and from the heart comes the best poetry que no??....thanks for reading it i appreciate it ;D[/shadow]

[LyrikalDreamer]

Chica!! your lines got heart in them!!! awesome in the mos def way!!!

[Amuze]

LyrikalDreamer said:

Chica!! your lines got heart in them!!! awesome in the mos def way!!!

geez thanks Lyrikal ;D..and again "from the heart comes ones best poetry"..i have come to learn that lol thanks and Lyrikal[/color]

[Erica]

hey girl that was a bomb a** poem and it was realy from the heart ;D

[Dimplez]

TEXT DAM GIRL I LIKE YOUR POEM VERY MUCH RIGHT NOW IM BARLEY WRITING A POEM.WATCH I'LL POST ONE UP AIGHT KEEP AN EYE OUT FOR ME AIGHT. LATER MUCH LOVE
DIMPLEZ[glow=red,2,300]TEXT[/glow]

[minilollie]

naw 4reelz that is bomb poem keep it up

i gat ur back dun trip

keep it up and dun et anyone ut you down you got everything to get there

but i give you props cause i think your stuff is tight

[Amuze]

thanks you guyz[/color]

[LA TRAVIEZA]

DAMN GURL, MIS RESPETOS 4 U. U DA BOMB AND U R RIGHT 4RM DA HEART COMES 1NES BEST POETRY!!!!! ;D

[Carlos]

[glow=red,2,300]"WHAT DON'T HATE PLAYAS[/glow]

[Pretty brown eyes]

Hey yall whats going on just checking in and just saying whats up and all that.........So whats up???
Just don't hate me because am so fine and all that good stuff and I know how to keep ma shit up, Up in tha game....Native gurl.....Ashkee's out ther halla here at me..............

[MIL3Y]

DAM GURL I GIVE U PROPS 4 DIS. GURL JUS KEEP UR HEAD THROUGH THA GOOD TIMEZ AND BAD.
~$MIL3Y~